UNLEASHED
NIGHTMARE
((A DOG AE))
((Chapter 1/Outsmarted))
I tip-toe cautiously into an odd looking room. (if you can even call it a room.)
There is an empty cage with a few squeaky toys littering the ground inside.
It’s apparent that dogs were being kept here, but are they the “ghost dogs“?
I am almost positive they are, it’s pretty obvious, in my opinion.
There are a few tables in the far corner of the room, but they are empty.
I thought for sure someone had been making this place their base camp.
“But why is this place empty?” I ask the ceiling, my voice echoing off the stalactites.
Then a sudden thought strikes me like a bolt of lightning.
Whoever was here…knew I was coming.
For some reason that thought sends a freezing chill down my spine.
It is cold and damp in the cave.
I hear the dripping noise of water leaking off of a sharp rock over head.
My ears start to ring.
My throat tightens.
There is something eerie about this place.
Suddenly I hear a soft whispering noise coming from behind me.
I whirl around to see…nothing. I am alone, though the unearthly whispering continues.
I stand as still as possible, hardly daring enough to breath.
It sounds like two voices, having a conversation with one another,
I swallow hard.
“Who’s there?” I whisper.
As quickly and quietly as it had begun, the whispering stops.
A few moments pass and still I hear nothing.
I suddenly feel the desperate urge to get out of this strange silence as fast as I can, but I won’t allow myself to leave before I have done some investigating.
I creep over to the empty tables at the corner of the room.
I run my hand over each one. No secret compartments or hidden drawers.
I glance under the tables, Nothing-wait…wait there is something.
I shiny bronze object catches my eye.
I pick it up. It’s a key! Not just any key either! The letter’s “MM” are scrawled across the front.
It had belonged to Mickey Malone!
“Yes!” I whisper.
I pocket the key and head back to the door which I’d entered only a few moments ago.
I start down the passageway, and soon find myself standing in front of the heavy iron door, behind which all answers lie…I hope.
I finger the key in the pocket of my tan hoodie.
I take a deep breath and pull it out.
I stare at it for a moment and smile.
This case is about to be closed.
Suddenly panic waves over me as I feel a slight movement in the air across my right cheek, as if someone were there breathing over my shoulder.
I gasp and whirl around.
There stands…no one?
“Stop it Nancy!” I scold myself.
I wipe the beads of sweat from my forehead and slide the key into the lock.
I turn it and am greeted by the satisfying click of the tumblers lining up.
With a loud groan the door swings open.
Behind the door lies…nothing?!
The room is empty!
Then I notice it, up on the wall at the end of the room.
One word, scrawled in sloppy red spray-paint.
“GOTCHA!”
My hand flies to my mouth.
“This can’t be happening!” I gasp. “This just can’t be happening!”
But it is happening.
My gut feeling had been right.
Someone knew I was coming.
I press my lips into a thin, angry line.
“Nuts!” I exclaim kicking the wall.
I, Nancy Drew have just been…outsmarted.
******
I storm up the steps to the cabin.
I swing the door open and slam it shut again as I enter.
“I can not believe this!” I shout to the listening dust bunnies. “I just can not believe this!”
I fling myself down on the couch and lay there in an enraged and miserable heap.
The gold is gone.
I am too late.
I groan and punch the dust covered pillow next to my face.
Never had any of my cases turned out this…this, horrible! I mean seriously, what could be worse than being outsmarted by a criminal!? Not much. And the worst part is, there’s nothing I can do about it. There is no way of knowing who took the gold and where they went. They’re probably long gone by now!
I sigh deeply and bury my face in the pillow.
It’s good to be alone.
No one to talk to, no pressures, just me and the nothingness.
I close my eyes and let myself be carried off into a peaceful sleep by the birds songs drifting through the open cabin window...
***
An obnoxiously loud noise drags me out of my sleep.
I sigh and refuse to open my eyes.
“Hannah, could you get the phone, please? If you don’t mind?”
I open my eyes a little.
Oh yeah, I’m at Moon Lake. No Hannah.
By the time I fully understand what’s going on the phone has stopped ringing.
I yawn and sit up, then I feel a vibrating in my pocket.
I reluctantly pull out my cell phone and flip it open.
“This is Nancy.”
“Nancy! It‘s Me!” Bess’s bubbly voice streams out of the speaker.
“Hi Bess, how’s it going?”
“Fine, but you sound horrible! Is everything ok?”
I think Bess knows me better than I know myself. It’s like she can read my mind.
“Oh, yeah,” I say rolling my eyes. “Everything is just great.”
“You are sooooo lying, but that doesn’t matter we can talk when I get there.”
I sit up straight.
“What?!”
“I’m coming to Moon Lake!” She nearly shouts in her excitement. “Well, I should say we, as in, George, Frank and Joe, too.”
“Woah, woah, woah, where do you think I’m going to have room for all you guys? The cabin is really small.”
“Oh don’t worry about that!” Bess says calmly. “George got this…um….” I hear George mumble something to Bess then she continues. “Yeah, like this, special water proof, pop up, easy to travel with, hiking tent for extreme conditions, so she can sleep outside! She’s really keen on using it.”
“Ok, so what about the rest of you?” I remind her of Frank, Joe and herself.
“Well…”
“Seriously Bess,” I tell her. “I don’t think this is a very good idea-”
“N-n-a---are---there? Nan--cy--?”
“Hello? Bess? You’re breaking up.”
“I have to---I’m---losing ---signal---I’ll see you---get there. B---ye.”
**Click**
I snap my phone shut and stare at it in disbelief.
How on earth am I going to tell my friends about what happened?
This day has just gotten worse.
I stand up and walk over to the window.
The lake is completely still.
It’s relaxing to just…look at it.
I would love to take the boat out right now, but I have work to do.
I sigh and head upstairs to get the two tiny bedrooms ready.
After I finish, I’m going for a ride.
***
Joe Hardy:
“We did not get lost!” I tell Frank for the eight millionth time as we drag our luggage up the dirt path to the small log cabin. We had to climb over this huge fallen tree to even get into the driveway.
“Oh yeah, Joe? What do you call ending up in eight different people’s driveways by mistake?” Frank tosses me an eye roll. “I knew I should have driven.”
“You probably would have done the same thing Frank!” I retort.
“Uhhh….no.” Says Frank in his “I’m so much smarter than you” voice.
“Uhhhh…yes.”
Frank shakes his head.
I roll my eyes and change the subject.
“So when did Bess say they were gonna get here?” I ask my older brother.
“They should be here…in about half an hour or so.” says Frank checking the time on his cell phone.
We climb the few steps to the porch and set our heavy suitcases down.
Frank knocks on the door.
A few moments pass and I send Nancy a text letting her know we’ve arrived.
“I don’t think she’s here.” Says Frank finally.
“Well I wouldn’t be either!” I say glancing around. “This place looks like it’s full of things to explore.” I gesture towards the lake and the dense woods behind the house.
Frank Glances at his watch and then out at the lake.
My cell phone vibrates.
I flip it open and I am greeted by a text from George.
“Almost there guys. 2 words: road construction. :/”
I sigh.
“Frank?”
“What?”
“I am officially bored.”
Nancy Drew:
Have I ever mentioned how much I love boating?
I love being out on the water! My favorite is kayaking though. Too bad I hadn’t thought to bring my Kayak. Oh well.
Presently I cut the motor in the middle of the lake.
I close my eyes and listen. No wonder Red Knott loves to bird watch around here! All I can hear is the sound of the birds songs…*Beep! Beep! Beep!* I roll my eyes, the birds and my cell phone. I flip it open and read the text from Joe.
“We’re @ the cabin…where R you?”
“Oh no!” I gasp. I had no idea they would be here this soon!
I text him back.
“I’m heading back 2 the cabin…sorry guys!”
I turn the key in the ignition.
It makes a straining noise then stops.
My jaw drops. This can not be happening!
I try again, and again…nothing.
I grind my teeth and clench my fists together.
After sitting stubbornly in the passengers seat for a moment, I say a prayer and decide to try it again.
I slide the key into the ignition and turn it.
The motor starts!
“Yes!” I nearly shout for joy! “Thank you, Lord!”
I turn the boat around and begin to speed towards Sally’s house.
Soon the dock comes into view and I slow down.
I look up and can just make out to figures sitting on the porch steps.
“Hey guys!” I call to them waving. “I am soooo sorry I wasn’t here!”
“It’s totally fine Nancy” Frank calls back. “We didn’t mind waiting.”
I pull the boat up alongside the dock and turn it off.
Frank and Joe meet me at the dock and tie the boat up while I grab my stuff and hop out.
“It’s great to see you guys!” I say giving them each a hug.
“It’s great to see you,” Said Joe. “And to be here! This place looks awesome!”
“Oh, it is.” I assure him. “Come on, I’ll show you guys the cabin.”
I lead them up to the small wooden house and help them drag all their luggage inside.
“It’s kinda small but, then I’m not in here much so I suppose It doesn’t matter.” I say glancing around.
“What is that?” Asks Joe pointing to the dog clock hanging on the wall.
I smile slightly and explain what it does.
“Woah! It opened a secret passage that leads to a speakeasy? Sweet!” Joe exclaims smiling. “When can we go see it? Now?”
“I think we should wait for Bess and George to arrive.” Says Frank. “They should be here any moment now.”
“Aww, you’re just scared!” Says Joe teasingly.
I smile a little. “Your bedroom is upstairs. You guys don’t mind sharing a room? Right?”
“No, not at all” Says Frank at the same time Joe says “Do we have to?”
Frank Elbows Joe and he quickly says he doesn’t mind.
“Good.” I say. “I’m a little short on space here so I’ll take all the cooperation I can get.”
*Beep Beep!*
“That must be Bess and George.” I say glancing out the window.
My thoughts are confirmed as Bess’s SUV pulls up to the fallen tree and she and George hop out.
I turn back to Frank and Joe. “Would you guys like to bring your stuff upstairs while I go and meet them?”
“Sure, Nance.” Says Frank. “We’ll meet you down here in a minute.”
I rush outside to meet Bess and George.
“Nannnnnnnccceeeeyyyyy!” Bess shouts, stretching my name like a rubber band.
“Hey guys!” I shout back. I get a running start and jump over the fallen maple.
“Nancy, It’s so good to see you!” George exclaims and the two cousins give me a hug.
Bess glances past me to the cabin. “I can not believe you’ve lasted this long out here.” she says shaking her head in disbelief.
I smile. “It’s not that bad.” I tell her. “Come on, let’s bring your luggage inside.”
“Oh, oh, Nancy!” Said George suddenly. “I brought you a little surprise!” She points to the roof of the car.
“My kayak!” I shout as a huge grin spreads across my face. “Oh George! Thank you!” I give her a big hug.
My Beautiful, light green-tie died kayak was strapped securely to the roof along with two other kayaks, one tan and the other light pink.
“Uhhh, Nancy?” asked Bess. “How are we going to get over this log?”
I stare at her puzzled. “What? What do you mean?”
I hear the cabin door open and close, and out of the corner of my eye, I see Frank and Joe walking down the steps.
Bess shoos a mosquito out of her face. “Nancy, you don’t actually expect me to climb over that sappy tree do you? It will totally ruin my new sundress!
Bess is wearing a white floral dress with light green high heeled sandals.
“Well, I uh…I guess you won’t be able to.” I say finally.
“I told you not to wear those shoes.” says George as she begins pulling large suitcases from the backseat.
George is sporting a much more…fitting outfit for camping. Dark Brown cargo pants, a blue camo top and hiking shoes.
“George! These shoes are at the height of style right now!” Bess says fixing her hair.
George rolls her eyes and tosses a suite case across the fallen tree.
“Be careful George!” Bess shouts in horror. “That was mine!”
“Well why don’t you come and give me a hand then?” George says, a hint of frustration in her voice.
“Uh, well…” Bess bites her lip looking for an excuse. “How am I supposed to do that with these heels?”
“Why do you think I said not to wear them?” Comes George’s muffled voice from the back of the car.
“But-”
“Joe, Frank! Thanks for coming to help us out!” I say relived to cut off Bess and George’s arguing.
“Hi guys! So glad to see you both again!” Says Bess excitedly.
I help George with the luggage (Jeez they don’t travel light, actually I should say Bess doesn’t travel light!) Then we climb over the log and start for the house.
“Guys! What about me?” Bess cries.
“Go ahead guys,” says Frank “I’ll help her.”
“Thank you.” George replies gratefully rolling her eyes.
I Sigh. This is going to be a long evening.
***
NIGHTMARE
((A DOG AE))
((Chapter 1/Outsmarted))
I tip-toe cautiously into an odd looking room. (if you can even call it a room.)
There is an empty cage with a few squeaky toys littering the ground inside.
It’s apparent that dogs were being kept here, but are they the “ghost dogs“?
I am almost positive they are, it’s pretty obvious, in my opinion.
There are a few tables in the far corner of the room, but they are empty.
I thought for sure someone had been making this place their base camp.
“But why is this place empty?” I ask the ceiling, my voice echoing off the stalactites.
Then a sudden thought strikes me like a bolt of lightning.
Whoever was here…knew I was coming.
For some reason that thought sends a freezing chill down my spine.
It is cold and damp in the cave.
I hear the dripping noise of water leaking off of a sharp rock over head.
My ears start to ring.
My throat tightens.
There is something eerie about this place.
Suddenly I hear a soft whispering noise coming from behind me.
I whirl around to see…nothing. I am alone, though the unearthly whispering continues.
I stand as still as possible, hardly daring enough to breath.
It sounds like two voices, having a conversation with one another,
I swallow hard.
“Who’s there?” I whisper.
As quickly and quietly as it had begun, the whispering stops.
A few moments pass and still I hear nothing.
I suddenly feel the desperate urge to get out of this strange silence as fast as I can, but I won’t allow myself to leave before I have done some investigating.
I creep over to the empty tables at the corner of the room.
I run my hand over each one. No secret compartments or hidden drawers.
I glance under the tables, Nothing-wait…wait there is something.
I shiny bronze object catches my eye.
I pick it up. It’s a key! Not just any key either! The letter’s “MM” are scrawled across the front.
It had belonged to Mickey Malone!
“Yes!” I whisper.
I pocket the key and head back to the door which I’d entered only a few moments ago.
I start down the passageway, and soon find myself standing in front of the heavy iron door, behind which all answers lie…I hope.
I finger the key in the pocket of my tan hoodie.
I take a deep breath and pull it out.
I stare at it for a moment and smile.
This case is about to be closed.
Suddenly panic waves over me as I feel a slight movement in the air across my right cheek, as if someone were there breathing over my shoulder.
I gasp and whirl around.
There stands…no one?
“Stop it Nancy!” I scold myself.
I wipe the beads of sweat from my forehead and slide the key into the lock.
I turn it and am greeted by the satisfying click of the tumblers lining up.
With a loud groan the door swings open.
Behind the door lies…nothing?!
The room is empty!
Then I notice it, up on the wall at the end of the room.
One word, scrawled in sloppy red spray-paint.
“GOTCHA!”
My hand flies to my mouth.
“This can’t be happening!” I gasp. “This just can’t be happening!”
But it is happening.
My gut feeling had been right.
Someone knew I was coming.
I press my lips into a thin, angry line.
“Nuts!” I exclaim kicking the wall.
I, Nancy Drew have just been…outsmarted.
******
I storm up the steps to the cabin.
I swing the door open and slam it shut again as I enter.
“I can not believe this!” I shout to the listening dust bunnies. “I just can not believe this!”
I fling myself down on the couch and lay there in an enraged and miserable heap.
The gold is gone.
I am too late.
I groan and punch the dust covered pillow next to my face.
Never had any of my cases turned out this…this, horrible! I mean seriously, what could be worse than being outsmarted by a criminal!? Not much. And the worst part is, there’s nothing I can do about it. There is no way of knowing who took the gold and where they went. They’re probably long gone by now!
I sigh deeply and bury my face in the pillow.
It’s good to be alone.
No one to talk to, no pressures, just me and the nothingness.
I close my eyes and let myself be carried off into a peaceful sleep by the birds songs drifting through the open cabin window...
***
An obnoxiously loud noise drags me out of my sleep.
I sigh and refuse to open my eyes.
“Hannah, could you get the phone, please? If you don’t mind?”
I open my eyes a little.
Oh yeah, I’m at Moon Lake. No Hannah.
By the time I fully understand what’s going on the phone has stopped ringing.
I yawn and sit up, then I feel a vibrating in my pocket.
I reluctantly pull out my cell phone and flip it open.
“This is Nancy.”
“Nancy! It‘s Me!” Bess’s bubbly voice streams out of the speaker.
“Hi Bess, how’s it going?”
“Fine, but you sound horrible! Is everything ok?”
I think Bess knows me better than I know myself. It’s like she can read my mind.
“Oh, yeah,” I say rolling my eyes. “Everything is just great.”
“You are sooooo lying, but that doesn’t matter we can talk when I get there.”
I sit up straight.
“What?!”
“I’m coming to Moon Lake!” She nearly shouts in her excitement. “Well, I should say we, as in, George, Frank and Joe, too.”
“Woah, woah, woah, where do you think I’m going to have room for all you guys? The cabin is really small.”
“Oh don’t worry about that!” Bess says calmly. “George got this…um….” I hear George mumble something to Bess then she continues. “Yeah, like this, special water proof, pop up, easy to travel with, hiking tent for extreme conditions, so she can sleep outside! She’s really keen on using it.”
“Ok, so what about the rest of you?” I remind her of Frank, Joe and herself.
“Well…”
“Seriously Bess,” I tell her. “I don’t think this is a very good idea-”
“N-n-a---are---there? Nan--cy--?”
“Hello? Bess? You’re breaking up.”
“I have to---I’m---losing ---signal---I’ll see you---get there. B---ye.”
**Click**
I snap my phone shut and stare at it in disbelief.
How on earth am I going to tell my friends about what happened?
This day has just gotten worse.
I stand up and walk over to the window.
The lake is completely still.
It’s relaxing to just…look at it.
I would love to take the boat out right now, but I have work to do.
I sigh and head upstairs to get the two tiny bedrooms ready.
After I finish, I’m going for a ride.
***
Joe Hardy:
“We did not get lost!” I tell Frank for the eight millionth time as we drag our luggage up the dirt path to the small log cabin. We had to climb over this huge fallen tree to even get into the driveway.
“Oh yeah, Joe? What do you call ending up in eight different people’s driveways by mistake?” Frank tosses me an eye roll. “I knew I should have driven.”
“You probably would have done the same thing Frank!” I retort.
“Uhhh….no.” Says Frank in his “I’m so much smarter than you” voice.
“Uhhhh…yes.”
Frank shakes his head.
I roll my eyes and change the subject.
“So when did Bess say they were gonna get here?” I ask my older brother.
“They should be here…in about half an hour or so.” says Frank checking the time on his cell phone.
We climb the few steps to the porch and set our heavy suitcases down.
Frank knocks on the door.
A few moments pass and I send Nancy a text letting her know we’ve arrived.
“I don’t think she’s here.” Says Frank finally.
“Well I wouldn’t be either!” I say glancing around. “This place looks like it’s full of things to explore.” I gesture towards the lake and the dense woods behind the house.
Frank Glances at his watch and then out at the lake.
My cell phone vibrates.
I flip it open and I am greeted by a text from George.
“Almost there guys. 2 words: road construction. :/”
I sigh.
“Frank?”
“What?”
“I am officially bored.”
Nancy Drew:
Have I ever mentioned how much I love boating?
I love being out on the water! My favorite is kayaking though. Too bad I hadn’t thought to bring my Kayak. Oh well.
Presently I cut the motor in the middle of the lake.
I close my eyes and listen. No wonder Red Knott loves to bird watch around here! All I can hear is the sound of the birds songs…*Beep! Beep! Beep!* I roll my eyes, the birds and my cell phone. I flip it open and read the text from Joe.
“We’re @ the cabin…where R you?”
“Oh no!” I gasp. I had no idea they would be here this soon!
I text him back.
“I’m heading back 2 the cabin…sorry guys!”
I turn the key in the ignition.
It makes a straining noise then stops.
My jaw drops. This can not be happening!
I try again, and again…nothing.
I grind my teeth and clench my fists together.
After sitting stubbornly in the passengers seat for a moment, I say a prayer and decide to try it again.
I slide the key into the ignition and turn it.
The motor starts!
“Yes!” I nearly shout for joy! “Thank you, Lord!”
I turn the boat around and begin to speed towards Sally’s house.
Soon the dock comes into view and I slow down.
I look up and can just make out to figures sitting on the porch steps.
“Hey guys!” I call to them waving. “I am soooo sorry I wasn’t here!”
“It’s totally fine Nancy” Frank calls back. “We didn’t mind waiting.”
I pull the boat up alongside the dock and turn it off.
Frank and Joe meet me at the dock and tie the boat up while I grab my stuff and hop out.
“It’s great to see you guys!” I say giving them each a hug.
“It’s great to see you,” Said Joe. “And to be here! This place looks awesome!”
“Oh, it is.” I assure him. “Come on, I’ll show you guys the cabin.”
I lead them up to the small wooden house and help them drag all their luggage inside.
“It’s kinda small but, then I’m not in here much so I suppose It doesn’t matter.” I say glancing around.
“What is that?” Asks Joe pointing to the dog clock hanging on the wall.
I smile slightly and explain what it does.
“Woah! It opened a secret passage that leads to a speakeasy? Sweet!” Joe exclaims smiling. “When can we go see it? Now?”
“I think we should wait for Bess and George to arrive.” Says Frank. “They should be here any moment now.”
“Aww, you’re just scared!” Says Joe teasingly.
I smile a little. “Your bedroom is upstairs. You guys don’t mind sharing a room? Right?”
“No, not at all” Says Frank at the same time Joe says “Do we have to?”
Frank Elbows Joe and he quickly says he doesn’t mind.
“Good.” I say. “I’m a little short on space here so I’ll take all the cooperation I can get.”
*Beep Beep!*
“That must be Bess and George.” I say glancing out the window.
My thoughts are confirmed as Bess’s SUV pulls up to the fallen tree and she and George hop out.
I turn back to Frank and Joe. “Would you guys like to bring your stuff upstairs while I go and meet them?”
“Sure, Nance.” Says Frank. “We’ll meet you down here in a minute.”
I rush outside to meet Bess and George.
“Nannnnnnnccceeeeyyyyy!” Bess shouts, stretching my name like a rubber band.
“Hey guys!” I shout back. I get a running start and jump over the fallen maple.
“Nancy, It’s so good to see you!” George exclaims and the two cousins give me a hug.
Bess glances past me to the cabin. “I can not believe you’ve lasted this long out here.” she says shaking her head in disbelief.
I smile. “It’s not that bad.” I tell her. “Come on, let’s bring your luggage inside.”
“Oh, oh, Nancy!” Said George suddenly. “I brought you a little surprise!” She points to the roof of the car.
“My kayak!” I shout as a huge grin spreads across my face. “Oh George! Thank you!” I give her a big hug.
My Beautiful, light green-tie died kayak was strapped securely to the roof along with two other kayaks, one tan and the other light pink.
“Uhhh, Nancy?” asked Bess. “How are we going to get over this log?”
I stare at her puzzled. “What? What do you mean?”
I hear the cabin door open and close, and out of the corner of my eye, I see Frank and Joe walking down the steps.
Bess shoos a mosquito out of her face. “Nancy, you don’t actually expect me to climb over that sappy tree do you? It will totally ruin my new sundress!
Bess is wearing a white floral dress with light green high heeled sandals.
“Well, I uh…I guess you won’t be able to.” I say finally.
“I told you not to wear those shoes.” says George as she begins pulling large suitcases from the backseat.
George is sporting a much more…fitting outfit for camping. Dark Brown cargo pants, a blue camo top and hiking shoes.
“George! These shoes are at the height of style right now!” Bess says fixing her hair.
George rolls her eyes and tosses a suite case across the fallen tree.
“Be careful George!” Bess shouts in horror. “That was mine!”
“Well why don’t you come and give me a hand then?” George says, a hint of frustration in her voice.
“Uh, well…” Bess bites her lip looking for an excuse. “How am I supposed to do that with these heels?”
“Why do you think I said not to wear them?” Comes George’s muffled voice from the back of the car.
“But-”
“Joe, Frank! Thanks for coming to help us out!” I say relived to cut off Bess and George’s arguing.
“Hi guys! So glad to see you both again!” Says Bess excitedly.
I help George with the luggage (Jeez they don’t travel light, actually I should say Bess doesn’t travel light!) Then we climb over the log and start for the house.
“Guys! What about me?” Bess cries.
“Go ahead guys,” says Frank “I’ll help her.”
“Thank you.” George replies gratefully rolling her eyes.
I Sigh. This is going to be a long evening.
***
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